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[凌辱虐情] 【我是臭傻屄】

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终于又等到了更新。这次还是滢心一贯的味道,开头很不错。看到作者最后说这一篇是构思了挺久的,希望尽快看到后续的更新啊。
另外感觉这一篇节奏有些太快了,难道是为了尽快引出后文?比如说给男朋友喂药那里,本来可以展开插一段肉戏的。因为女主也就是初中生而已,她哪里知道什么雌激素有什么用,应该是她的主人要求的。按以前林乐乐之类那些文的展开,这里应该是女主先觉得不太好吧然后被一顿爆操下限再度丢失完全听从主人安排并且自己越想越下贱越舒服。这样的情节也蛮爽的啊。
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