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第二人稱的敘述法讀來總是格外特別,幽怨的傾訴

我想,女主角ˋ和陌生男人上床,應是基於報復心態吧,如果語氣帶有不滿,可能較自然點
例如:"我終於明白偷情的滋味是如何美妙"  "你們的性技差之萬里"   "他給了我你無法給我的"   
      ""老公,我被他征服了,就像你被野花野草征服一樣!"......等等,婉約但帶著埋怨.

感覺從頭到尾只是淡淡地向老公報告事情的進程,與對他的深情,不太像是個深閨怨婦
如果在古代還有可能,但在現代就......

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