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[facemaskdon] 【丹青韵】（八）

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还是仿古文精炼啊，短短篇幅感觉如身临其境，很容易让读者产生共鸣浮想联翩啊，文章用词确实讲究啊，和文章题目一样真有种丹青韵味在其中啊。对谭生和林氏这一段尤其传神，描写细腻，情节布置不会让谭生轻易得到，会有个循序渐进的过程，伴随着林氏心态的慢慢转变，在安排点小情节，就水到渠成了
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